Steemit Challenge S26wk6 |Two timing
John leaned back in his seat watching the Australian countryside slip past the window The bus hummed softly carrying him from Sydney to Canberra His phone vibrated flashing his wifes name He smiled answering quickly
Everything fine love The flight from Delhi to Sydney was longed but Im okay now he assured her They exchanged a few tender words before hanging up
As he slipped the phoned back into his pocket a girl in her mid twenties slid into the seat beside him Her hair fell in waves over her shoulders and her eyes held a spark of curiosity
Mind if I sit here she asked
Not at all John replied adjusting slightly
The bus lurched forward and soon their conversation began with simple questions Where are you headed What do you do but quickly turned into laughter and deeper stories She introduced herself as Tina a freelance designer and her energy filled the space around her
Hours passed unnoticed John found himself surprised at how easily he spoke about things he usually kept buried his dreams his worries even small frustrations about married life Tina listened with an intensity that felt flattering even intoxicating
As the bus neared Canberra John grew restless A strange temptation stirred within him When they finally stood to leave Tina extended her hand Their palms met briefly and as she pulled away he felt the press of something small her business card She smiled knowingly before walking down the aisle
https://www.pexels.com/
John stared at the card Why did she give it to me he wondered Was it professional interest or something unspoken His heart pounded as he slipped it into his jacket pocket
Outside the bus station his phone buzzed again A message from his wife Hope you reached safely Miss you already
The contrast between Tinas smile and his wifes words felt like two forces tugging at him from opposite directions His conscience whispered Dont even think about it Yet curiosity whispered louder What if
John stood frozen for a long moment before finally stepping into a cab He replayed the hours on the bus her laughter the glint in her eyes the ease of their bond It all felt dangerously close to something more
At the hotel he tossed his bag on the bed and pulled out the card A name a number and three simple words Call me anytime
That night John wrestled with himself He imagined dialing the number meeting her for dinner seeing where the night could lead But alongside the thrill he also imagined his wifes face if she ever found out the trust in her eyes shattered their years of love undone by a fleeting choice
He remembered her voice from earlier soft and sincere Take care love That memory anchored him more than any temptation could
With a sigh John tore the card into tiny pieces and flushed them away The decision hurt in a strange way as though he had walked away from a secret adventure but the relief that followed was stronger
The next morning John sat by the window of his hotel sipping coffee He reflected on how easy it was for temptation to slip into ordinary life a smile from a stranger a spark of connection the illusion of something new He realized how fragile loyalty could be when tested and how important it was to guard it fiercely
Tina would fade into memory just another face in the blur of travel But his wife she was real she was home she was the one who had built years with him not hours
John picked up his phone and dialed her When she answered he said I just wanted to hear your voice again
Her laughter warm and familiar filled the room And in that sound John knew he had chosen rightly
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