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RE: White light!- a #fiftywords poem for @jayna

in #fiftywords • 7 years ago

I like the way you've hit exactly 50 words and the upbeat lyrical quality to your words. For some reason my brain really wants to change the last two lines to
'A glimpse of beauty,
That which outlives everyone!' But ignore it. It is truly lovely the way it is.

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     7 years ago 

    thankyou @gmathe2. I appreciate your c.c. I'm glad you like it.

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