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RE: Astral Echoes - A short story for Steemit. Finishthestory contest Week #22

in #finishthestory7 years ago

Wow. Great twist and ending @dirge! I love the way you have the demon is possessing the protagonist for debts owed. An interesting and effective take on the prompt and the dialogue moves us along the story line really well. Great stuff :-)