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RE: Truth Does Hurt and it is Bitter too!
I know that this isn't at all relevant to the point of your poem, but... coffee doesn't have to be so bitter. If you brew it with cooler water (like 95 degrees Celsius), it doesn't get that bitter taste.
But, I know, not what the poem is about. Still, now you can have better coffee, and that's a metaphor for life!
I fully agree with you @improv . I really appreciate your comment because after i stopped my 5minute timer i know that this poem will be categorized us unfinished as even myself failed to bind the relationship of the benefit of drinking a cup of coffee (no matter how bitter it is or the technique to brew a coffee) to the future postive results of accepting the truth. Honestly, I was even thinking to relate figuratively the different types of coffe in relation to how we can accept the truth and the reality of life in a way that we will enjoy it instead of having a self destruction.
I really hope I can "improv" (e) my skill to pour my thoughts in a 5 minute #freewrite.
Thank you so much i consider your comment as a constructive criticism to improve myself and to do more.
Cheers!
I didn't even mean it as criticism! Just want everyone to be able to enjoy their coffee :)
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You are a coffee lover indeed.. =)
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