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RE: Truth Does Hurt and it is Bitter too!

in #freewrite7 years ago

I fully agree with you @improv . I really appreciate your comment because after i stopped my 5minute timer i know that this poem will be categorized us unfinished as even myself failed to bind the relationship of the benefit of drinking a cup of coffee (no matter how bitter it is or the technique to brew a coffee) to the future postive results of accepting the truth. Honestly, I was even thinking to relate figuratively the different types of coffe in relation to how we can accept the truth and the reality of life in a way that we will enjoy it instead of having a self destruction.

I really hope I can "improv" (e) my skill to pour my thoughts in a 5 minute #freewrite.

Thank you so much i consider your comment as a constructive criticism to improve myself and to do more.

Cheers!

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I didn't even mean it as criticism! Just want everyone to be able to enjoy their coffee :)

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You are a coffee lover indeed.. =)

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