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RE: #freewriting - The sound of the sirens

in #freewrite6 years ago

Very nicely written :) this sounds like a very scary ritual. I was thinking about using the mythological siren call as well, you used it quite well here. I also like the blend of modern and myth, it's always a fascinating way to do fantasy tales.

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Looking forward to your story.
I think if you want to keep the old tales alive you need to modernize it a bit.

Thanks for taking the time to read it and your comment.

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