Elian´s room

in Freewriters6 days ago

Hello, people.

This is my second submittion on Freewriters. The manager, @freewritehouse, asked me to take my work to @hive-166850 and after I joined I still couldn´t make it.

I´d like to hear some advice.


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Elian´s room

Covered in blood, I crawl across the floor, the two walls, and the ceiling of this room. I've already made one turn.

I change the line. I continue with the message.

I'm sure the trail I leave means something, in some language, dead or alive. Or half-dead or semimortuus, like me.

There are many systems for measuring height, depth, and length, but what about time?

Time lasts more or less depending on the pleasure or pain.

Fleeing with or without time, celebrating another day of life, a week, a month, a year... until now.

Understanding the situations I've experienced led me to make decisions that, as a young man, made me look reckless, and as an adult, like a father insensitive to the cries of the people in my care.

Line change. Change of subject.

My blood sigils are drying up.

If I have a tombstone, I hope neither my legal name nor any of my false names are carved into the stone.


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What do you mean by: I still could not make it?

You write for you, yourself and will be noticed more in a community where more life goes on.
There's no way the freewritehouse can grow without the Adm holding all keys. As long as that is a fact all activities will take place at CCC

I said it because you ask me to join the @hive-166850 community to submitt my job and I thought it was like the other communities and the interfeace would gieve me the option to publish in there and show me the stories/poems just like in any other community. I had to come back to Freewriters to do so and write your name to get your attention to check if I made a mistake.

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Not eveey community is the same. At least not with me. If that would be the case why start a new community and how to find certain posts back?

If you looked you noticed that the free writers are at CCC.

You are free to post where you like but my time is limited and so are the votes I can give.

To put it simple: I don't want to invest my votes in a community the owner is not willing to invest while my own communities lacks support.

I believe all the communities I gave a hand earned enough during all those years while I paid the bill.

A great day/weekend and happy writing.

@wakeupkitty

Thanks for the explanation. I feared I was posting uncorrectly. The rules vary in every community.
I understand your ways to manage Freewriters.
See you soon.

I like what you wrote. For sure many will recognise aspects of their lives in these words.

If a story touches many people and they can see themselves in it, then the story works. Yet, Elian´s room can get many meanings to each readers´eyes.