An empty head

in Freewriters10 months ago (edited)

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On Monday I go for a better life

Tuesday everything goes wrong and the worst scenario becomes reality

Wednesday I get out of bed late. They say a lesson to be learned is valuable for the future.

If that's true what is it that makes me feel on Thursday a
Donkey at work?

Friday...it all turns out to be an illusion, a vision caused by fever or lack of company. My lively imagination, the words I said and shared, it's just a fairy tale

Saturday you say? Time flies by. The advice: ignore and you'll be fine

Sunday, if I feel to it I'll visit Steemit on the blockchain or not.



The prompts did help to write I had nothing specific in mind, started, one prompt l, on sentence.
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Conozco el miedo a la página en blanco. A veces las musas se niegan a asistirnos. Pero esa es la magia de la escritura: superarnos y crear, a veces los fracasos son buenos hasta a para los grandes maestros. De ellos se gana experiencia. Buen texto, sigue creando.

You are not bad at all. What causes the fear?

 10 months ago (edited)

Neat! Sounds very poetic. There's a little quote in Carl Sagan's Demon-Haunted World I always liked:

The moon leaps
In the Great River's current...
Floating on the wind,
What do I resemble?

Du Fu, 'Travelling at Night'
(China, Tang Dynasty, 765)

Reminds me of that.

 10 months ago (edited)

Found another one:

Traveling at Night, trying to Write a Poem
A breeze gently sways the grass that grows along the shore,
The danger is in raising a sail on a boat alone at night,
Still, stars sparkle above a wide skyline,
While the moon rises as the river flows by

What is my name but the works I've written,
Officially retired now that I am old and sick.
Fluttering from place to place,
Between heaven and earth, like a seagull.

Du Fu, on the Yangtze, also 765 apparently

This might be an unabridged version of the same poem actually. I'm not sure. I like how this sort of expressionistic stuff seems to transcend cultural boundaries. Exhibit A:

That's from the original Night of the Hunter. It's the kind of vibe I imagine while reading that poem.

An interesting sharing. 👍

It sounds more as if it's a follow up or the answer. Isn't it interesting how words remember us of other words. This one remembers me of Gerard Reve.

It all can be said with only a few words. Too many kill the essence and imagination of the reader.

Did you read the poem @grebmot shared @sbamsoneu?

I should do this too again but somehow I forgot. My ghostwriter disappeared I could contract you if you let me read first! Let's see if hive can make up a story I also forgot the aet & writing. The film and series called.

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