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RE: Retro Review - Final Fantasy VII
Hi, I really like your review! It feels as though you've had this automatically translated from its original language (written by you), am I correct? I would like to suggest you read through the English translation and change it somewhat here and there, before submitting the story. It wouldn't take too long and I think you could take out some weirdly formed sentences that way. It would make for an even better article and might attract even bigger upvotes :-)
You're absolutely right, I'm not very good in English but I'm trying to improve that, thanks for the advice.
Yeah, I figured as much. It's not a problem really, but when I read your comments, I feel you can do much better than an automated translation service. It's a looooong text, so I understand the translation service completely! I think you can definitely improve the text if you scan over it afterwards though. It'll help your English aswell! :-)
Yeah! you're very kind and again, thanks for your advice.
It's no problem at all! I hope I didn't offend you in any way, because that's not my intention. I Just can't always keep quiet when I see promising Steemians who could become even better :D
You did not offend me at all hehehe, in fact I appreciate a lot when people give me tips on how to improve. It's good to meet people like you on this platform.
Aww happy to hear that! Well I've followed you, so I can more easily find your future posts. The English ones that is, my Spanish isn't so great (as in, I don't know Spanish at all) ;-)
I already have in mind my next post on video games, maybe for Monday of the next week I publish it. I hope you like it and I will apply the advice you have given me :D
Sounds great! I'll be looking forward to reading it :D