I'm so happy for her that he noticed that! I don't even want to think what torture she would have to go through. I like that you keep your story positive, just like she is anti-horror :)

I also don't like too much violence and blood everywhere but I enjoy stories that are little bit scary. And yours was like this. I have enjoyed reading and I must say that I didn't expect him to be hiding in her car. I thought he would be waiting for her somewhere behind the trees. I like to be surprised with stories like yours :)

Thank you for sharing and congratulations on your curie vote!