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RE: The story of How Cancer Saved my dear friend's Life - Kara Kenyon I love You!
It started off really great, but somewhere in the middle I began to notice that it either felt rushed or you simply forgot to do a look-over as the number of spelling and grammar mistakes began to distract me from your story. I had to re-read it, and enjoyed it. When you have the time to proofread this, I'm sure it will be a marvelous work that many will come to enjoy. Keep up the great work! Cheers! <3
Thank you!! Your feedback is greatly appreciated :) . I got into my feels a bit with this one and feel the same. Ill made adjustments!
I gave you an upvote! I do hope your story can reach out to more people and be inspirational or motivational for them as well. :D