Tip: Try to use some original titles and not those boring: The diary game... + date ones!
Also use hashtags that makes sense. Yours don't. The only one that might you put at the last spot meaning it cannot be found. Also use short ones and words you would use to search for posts like these if you google.
Like: life clothes secondhand
Thank you for the recommendations,i hope I can improve my next posts soon. I'd love to gear more from you