Welcome to week 4:
" Searching for lost pets classifieds"
Entry N° 3 ✍

Hi, @sur-riti

First, I apologize for the delay in reporting the results. Several circumstances arose, including disasters suffered by some friends and acquaintances caused by the rains.

It's a wonderful story. You present the personality of the boy, who shares his thoughts with you. You describe the almost maternal care the boy provides to the kitten; it's touching. Likewise, you show us his worries and expectations about how he might be doing, alone and lost. As a reader, I missed knowing the characteristics that made Tinsi "a fantastic animal." Thank you for sharing such a lovely story with us.