Are you sure you don't write stories for a magazine? Your narrative is incredibly well-structured and coherent. You managed to keep me hooked throughout the entire story, and I found myself praying for Rose's salvation until the very end. It's a beautifully crafted work of fiction.
Wow, thank you so much for your kind words! I'm absolutely flattered. And nah, I'm not on any magazine's payroll... yet! 😄 Just a humble part-time blogger sharing tales here with amazing readers like you. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story and became invested in Rose's journey. That's the dream for any writer—to keep readers hooked until the very last word.