Such a touching and heartfelt take on the original prompt. The way you’ve woven a mother’s grief into the story gives the twist an even deeper impact than the nightmare version. With just a little polishing of the language and perhaps a slightly sharper ending, this piece could shine even more. Beautifully done!
Thank you @soulfuldreamer, I absolutely agree with your opinion, it was sounding good but something was not there. Often we have those stories in our imagination and it is a kind of art to put it on paper and to make it so good that a person who reads can feel the same.