Hello Joslud,

Your post blends anecdote, psychology, and philosophy. It’s less “storytelling” and more essay-reflection.

I would say: "Smart link to twilight states → gives readers a scientific and relatable entry point & personal experience makes it engaging."

The fear is intellectual more than visceral...

Overall this is a valid and creative interpretation of the contest. Where your prompt invites a chilling “What if the ghost is technology itself — silently lying next to us, typing for us, thinking for us?”