An accident that should not have happened if only he had listened to his family the many times they told him. Arrogance is never good and can lead us to make serious mistakes.
The story is good, my friend, and it contains a great moral. You forgot to include an image to illustrate the text. I hope you can edit and correct it so that your story does not go unnoticed by some. A good image sometimes works as a hook to attract readers to your publication.
It was a pleasure to read you.
Yh
And the old man seem quite stubborn.
Also, I didn't forget to add the image. Been having this little issue for quite a while of not being able to upload images.
It would adjust itself and I won't stop trying to upload the image.
Thanks for the look out and reading 🤭💐