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RE: [ MY LOCAL NEWS ], PUSAT PERBELANJAAN TERBESAR DI ACEH DI LALAP SI JAGO MERAH.
Thank you for taking part in the My Local News challenge.
This has the potential to be a good news story, but unfortunately it is let down by poor writing style.
Thank you for your input.
I will continue to learn to be a good and interesting reporter.