You took a new account?
It would be good if you read the rules of this community and use the right hashtags.
Keep in mind that we are for and about artists and in average reading is not what people do a lot.
If you improved in such a short time it's awesome, but it would be good if what you wrote fits more to what you show and you find a way that people get curious, read what you write and will also see your drawings.

Please, change your hashtags! The first of this community is #artonsteemit the next is #drawing

Note: if you post will not be edited on short term it will be muted.