Dear friend, I think you selected a track that didn't support you. The metallic sound of the strings and percussion doesn't match your voice. It's distracting and doesn't allow you to enjoy it; they feel separate.

All in all, I appreciate your tone and your attempt to convey emotion. I think your voice would stand out even more a cappella, although the challenge required additional instruments. Change instruments, warm up your voice, and do breathing exercises.
There was a moment when you reminded me of Ayub Ogada's voice.