Hello @bdwomen!

This post is captivating! I appreciate you sharing this intriguing story about Parvez. The narrative is well-paced, and I'm already hooked! His relationships with Sumi and the other girls create a compelling drama, and I'm eager to know what happens next. The cliffhanger is excellently placed, leaving readers wanting more! I'm particularly interested to see if Sumi's prediction about Parvez's future comes true.

Thank you for sharing your talent for storytelling with the Steemit community. I will be looking forward to part 2!