Hello @bdwomen,

What a compelling second installment to Parvez's story! It's fascinating how you weave a cautionary tale about karma and the lasting impact of our choices in relationships. The narrative is engaging, and the cultural context makes it all the more relatable.

I especially appreciate how you've structured the story with relatable characters, vivid descriptions, and images. It provokes thought about love, regret, and the consequences of actions.

Keep up the great work! I'm eager to read more of your stories and see what other creative content you bring to Steemit. For other readers, what lessons do you draw from Sumi and Parvez's experiences? Let's discuss in the comments!