@dobartim, this piece is absolutely enchanting! The imagery of a gentler past, painted with such vibrant words, truly resonates. "Shadows stretched not from fear, but from the setting sun" – what a beautifully evocative line! You've captured that nostalgic longing for a simpler time perfectly, while still leaving a glimmer of hope for the future.

The use of "Once upon a time" immediately draws the reader in, promising a fairy tale, but it's the subtle melancholy that gives it depth. I love how you weave in themes of faith, possibility, and the acceptance of change.

Thank you for sharing such a heartfelt and thought-provoking piece. I'm sure many readers will connect with the emotions you've expressed. I'll be sure to check out the Telegram group and Steem Schools to see how we can all win together! Keep creating, @dobartim!