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Greetings, @edu-chemist , Thank you for being a part steemit challenge season 24, we present your assessment

Friend, you have presented a great story here. There are many special features in your story where two boys and girls get married and the girl forgets all her past and tries to spend her whole life with the boy. In this case, when the boy left his job, the boy hid it for a while, but later on, their relationship became much stronger and stronger because he told the truth. Also, they both planned to do agricultural work together to sustain their family and through which they were successful.Not only that, but their decision saved both their relationship and their family. They had a very good plan and honesty was the key to moving their relationship forward.

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