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Greetings, @aviral123 , Thank you for being a part steemit challenge season 24, we present your assessment

It was very good. You presented a family story. It was an educational story where after the father of the family dies, the eldest son of the family takes over the responsibility of the family. It is natural. But here, after becoming the eldest son, he definitely took responsibility. But he did not respect that responsibility and ultimately put the responsibility in a dirty situation. After taking responsibility, he tortured and mistreated all the family members and finally tried to kill and eat the younger brother's property, which is definitely a bad thing.By taking advantage of his younger brother, he tried to explain that there must have been some hidden dishonesty within him and that it was impossible for him to ever win in life through this.

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