Wordsmiths Fiction Week 1: The Disappeared Leader

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"Bismillahir Rahmanir Raheem"

Assalamualaikum Everyone.
This is @tammanna from #Bangladesh.

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How are you guys? I hope everyone is well and I am well too, Alhamdulillah. Today I came to participate in the 24th learning season challenge Wordsmiths Fiction Week 1, and I liked this adventure block story a lot where the theme has been given before and we have to write the final episode. It is a very adventurous product and story that I like a lot. Also, I have read various books and TV shows before. I used to watch and read the stories with great enthusiasm, so today I will write the last part according to my wishes, but let's get started.

Here the theme of the story is given and according to that, we can see that the main hero of the story is Johnson who was the leader of the ship and also all his colleagues and he was moving forward in the sea with a ship with 10 to 12 passengers and they faced some obstacles on the way of this journey.

They saw that the condition of the ship in front was quite bad and every part of the ship was broken and they were not running properly because of this the ship's operations had stopped. Also, the ship's radio was not working properly so they almost gave up hope of getting any help. In such a situation, every people was in a state of despair and did not know what to do, but everyone was under pressure to stop their ship on a small island ahead and there they would rebuild their ship and return home. While they were thinking like this, the night fell and everyone fell asleep.

In the morning, a strange incident happened on the ship. Everyone noticed that the leader of the ship was not present on the ship. He could not be found. The entire ship was searched but he was not found anywhere. Everyone became more worried and then they came to a decision they thought that they should form a team and they would enter the small island or the jungle nearby to search for their leader.

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According to that, several people, including a volunteer, entered the nearby forest and scattered around to find the leader. After searching for several hours, a colleague went to the middle of the forest and found the leader lying unconscious. He asked why he was in such a condition. He also had various injuries on his body. There was a mark on the body, probably from animal , so that colleague called the rest of his team and took the leader back to the ship unharmed. After everyone treated and cared for him for a while, the leader's sence returned.

Then they felt some relief and they asked the leader why he had left the ship and why he was in such a state. Then the leader remembered everything and started saying that last night when everyone was sleeping, the leader was thinking about how to save the passengers of the ship. At that time, he saw several people in the forest lighting torches and staying there.

So he got off the ship and entered the jungle with great difficulty to get help from them. When he went to them, he saw that they were wild people in the jungle and that they had hunted an animal in the jungle and had gathered together to burn it and eat it. They were celebrating by lighting a fire. But he went there and told them about his problem.

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But they told him that they could not help him in any way. Then, when he failed and returned to the ship, several tigers and lions chased him from the jungle and he started running at a high speed in the jungle to escape from them. Then, while running, he entered the middle of the jungle and then he hit a tree and almost fell down.

Then when he saw that his body was in a very bad condition, he jumped into the hole below to escape the tigers' attack and after that, he did not remember anything else and while jumping into the hole below, his body was cut in various places due to which he was injured. After that, he didn't remember anything else and then he got his sence back. Then everyone said that of course, we should thank Allah that Allah has sent you back safely from such a terrible situation. It is very grateful. We will now try to rebuild our ship and with it, we will move forward to our destination.

Although the ship's leader was quite ill, he was still very happy that he had returned healthy and he went forward to work shoulder to shoulder with his colleagues.

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I invite these few people to join the contest. @ikwal @event-horizon @denmarkguy

Thank you very much everyone

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Hello @tammanna, thank you so much for taking part in Week of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.

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Story Setting & Word-Building You have missed a couple of points in your story otherwise it could be a fantastic idea. I will mention the missed points in my report so that it doesn't give lead to other posters this week. Your story line has all elements of making a good story though!1.5/3
Theme & Message1.5/2
Formatting & Presentation You have used three images against the requirement of 1/21/2
Originality & Uniqueness2/3
Total6/10

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Wishing you best of luck for the contest and looking forward to next week's story.
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