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RE: Neon signs
That's right. In addition, the narrative influences the tone and the desired effect. The flow of consciousness is basically that: flowing without barriers, without apparent rules. The same thing happens when we write psychological text; the chaos that reigns must be allowed to show, otherwise it hinders the story. If I want to achieve something like blood, blood, blood, blood. The effect is very different from if I write “a lot of blood.” And I would write all those words without any punctuation. Otherwise, I feel like the language is limiting me. That what I'm trying to convey is much further from my vision.