I like the style, more than one person may feel like they are traveling with a knife stuck in their throat. Others may see the knife, but the person carrying it cannot. They can only feel its edge and the sharp, saw-like cut. Could you chew something else? The blood would be a river. Removing it is not a good idea.
Some smart alecks might have something activate in their frontal lobe and understand something for the first and only time. No one wanted to carry a photograph of a knife anywhere. Whales or little colorful fish?
It's time for support.
You have my pen and my little vote. Use them wisely where you need them. How else will they want to touch our bags in some old train station?
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Me gusta el estilo, más de uno puede sentir que viaja con un cuchillo atravesado en la garganta. Otros pueden ver el cuchillo, pero el que lo lleva no. Solo puede sentir su filo y el punzante corte en forma de sierra. ¿Podría masticar algo más? La sangre sería un río. Extraerlo no es una buena idea.
Algunos listillos, puede que se les active algo en el lóbulo frontal y entiendan algo por primera y única vez. Nadie quería llevar una fotografía de un cuchillo en ninguna parte. ¿Ballenas o pequeños pececitos de colores?
Es hora del apoyo.
Tenés mi pluma y mi pequeño voto. Usalos sabiamente dónde vos los necesitáis. ¿De qué otra forma, luego querrán tocarnos el saco en alguna vieja terminal de trenes?
One drop of water won't make you wet... many will and change into a river. The snowball or domino affect still works. So I am happy with every small vote, each type of support. If we all would, it would look so much better. If the entire platform (or world) refuses or is too scared or hopes a handful will pull the car it's a pity for them.
Paradises can be built everywhere and once build it's not said their won't be a gate to keep the parasites out. One needs to protect the fruits.
Let's see if a few see the light or have some great ideas.