Hi,
This is the place for freewriters and a freewriters just writes down what pops up in his/her mind without further thinking and what we don't do is adding titles/sub titles to your text.
It feels as if you are following a certain template.
We like to see/read creativity, thoughts, feelings here.

I wonder how old you are that you already can talk about friendships which survived the test of time/hardships. I would never say that.