Black & White

in Freewriters19 hours ago

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In mid of December, in a one of those cold winter nights. She went to ballet school for her last lesson. She wanted to give it all she got. Her fellow mates finished their practice and about to leave. But, she stayed longer. There is a voice in her head that says, tomorrow I am going to leave this town and probably this is the last lesson that I will do in here. Who knows, I might not get the chance to play or practice when I leave.

The young girl has a lot of dreams. But, also has a sense of art in what she does in her spare time. She was not like any other that were there. She was in her best moments of having fun, having the thought that she always has to perform her best at all times. It is a big commitment to give ones best at everything. It is probably turning every single enjoyment to a responsibility. But, that is what she knew. Those are her thoughts. Isn't everyone is made up of his thoughts and experience?

The clock was almost 12 midnight. The time where the school closes. Everyone was gone already, except for the staff. She just finished her last ballet dance and about to leave, a moment before she lost her balance on the stairs and fell. She hurt her ankle.

She went outside and stayed down on the pavement, holding her ankle and looking the grey bricks on the ground. It seems that this color has painted itself all over the scene. In her mind, she was seeing herself and everything around her as black and white. The weather was cold, and the wind blew fast. Maybe taking on of her most enjoyable hobbies with it.

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Saya merasa sangat senang karena anda telah hadir di sini lebih cepat, mungkin aku juga akan segera hadir.... sekarang aku sedang berada di rumah sakit dan itu sangat membosankan.... anak-anakku berada di rumah mereka tinggal bertiga....di rumah sakit itu sangat membosankan aku tidak bisa leluasa..... semoga anda beruntung temanku👍🌹

I am sorry to hear that. I hope you are feeling better now. Well, thank you for taking the time to check my post. It's been a long time since I the last time I wrote a long post. I got busy lately..

Good luck to you too,,,

Terimakasih temanku atas doa terbaiknya, saya Sedang menjaga suami saya di rumah sakit dan akhirnya saya juga hampir ikut sakit karena susah beristirahat karena bukan dirumah.

Sesibuk apapun jangan lupa jaga kesehatan karena kesehatan itu mahal harganya temanku

Anytime =D,

You do that too.. It is probably our most precious thing that we have. I hope he is feeling better by now,

Amin.... semoga hari ini kami bisa pulang.......

 8 hours ago 

She was so desperate to her dreams. When she felt down her part of dream is little destroyed. I felt bad by assuming the story.

Moreover you write it very nice I read it and think that I'm reading a part of novel.

Best of luck for contest🎀

Hopefully, it wasn't too dark of a story..

Thank you, I really appreciate this comment!

Best of luck to you too, in this one and the next ones =D