It is good to see you give poetry a try. To start with it's easier and more fun to write than to read.

When you write a poem it is good to try not to use the same words over and over again, to evoke a certain feeling and to keep a rhythm. What is the feeling that you experience with real friendship? Can you convey that.

I am curious about what your next poem will be.

Hashtags

1 #freewrite (not freewriters) - your text is a freewrite which means that you have not thought extensively about what you are going to write.
2 #burnsteem25 - an internal hashtag that certainly does not belong among the first 4 and is pointless in itself because everyone can see whether you burn 25% of your rewards. You do not do that so this means: hashtag abuse! which is not appreciated.
3 #steemexclusive - an internal hashtag. You indicate with this that you have not posted this piece anywhere else. Does it make sense to use this hashtag? I don't think so because anyone who wants to know if this is true will definitely check if this is the case and you are not lying (the same goes for using AI and plagiarism)
4 #friends - external hashtag that relates to the subject of your post - makes sense and belongs among the first 4 hashtags
5 #poem: external hashtag - if what you are writing is a poem then you use this hashtag

In your case you could use the following hashtags for this freewrite in this order:
#freewrite #poem #friends (or #friendship) #relationships

With these hashtags you would say: give me a freewrite, a poem about friend/friendship/relationships

Hashtags like: steemexclusive, burnsteem25, clubstatus, country are all intern hashtags and don't belong among the first 4. Why the first 4? Because Steemit makes a huges difference if it comes to be found. Not all hashtags counts as heavy.