Very nice contribution, sensitive and well-structured, we can see that you followed the lesson (silence of rushes, addition of external audio with fades, clear voice-over, cropping in 9:16 and Steemit overlay), which gives a coherent and pleasant result. During the narration, he prefers to slightly lower the music rather than increase the voice in order to obtain a softer balance. Overall, it is clean, moving and completely in the spirit of the exercise!