Dear @shahid76, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.65/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | I felt you rushed through John's inner conflict and repeated his restlessness a bit too much. |
| Total | 9.35/10 |
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- Overall, your story stood out for originality and the positive resolution, but it lost some intensity by underplaying John's guilt and his wife's role.