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RE: "Pick a Word, Paint a Story #23"

Your story about the lantern is beautiful and nostalgic. I love how you've woven in the themes of hope, resilience, and the significance of the lantern to Ammaan Karima. The way you've described the lantern as a source of light and comfort in a time of darkness is vivid and evocative.The story of Ammaan Karima and her disabled son is touching, and the way you've portrayed her love for the lantern and her determination to find a solution to their electricity problems is inspiring. The contrast between the lantern's gentle light and the harsh realities of poverty is striking.Your writing style is clear and engaging, making it easy to visualize the scenes and characters.

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Thank you so much dear ,your comments always encourage me a lot,you read my post with fully attention it's a great pleasure for me.Thank you sooo much again.Allah almighty bless you always.