The Song of Lost Gold
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When I was a child, stormy nights were my favorite. The rain beat against the living room windows like an ancient drum, and my grandfather, sitting in his creaky old leather armchair, told me stories. But not like other stories. Not the ones from fairy tales or caped superheroes. No. His were stranger, deeper. They smelled of the dust of time and the memory of stones.
He often spoke to me of a different gold. An ancient gold. Alive.
“You know, kid, gold isn’t just a metal. It's a memory. A voice. And sometimes… he sings. »
I laughed. I thought he was crazy. But deep down, I loved it.
He described to me a valley hidden in the bowels of the world, somewhere between the Tibetan mountains and the dreams of a solitary old man. A valley where gold was not extracted with a pickaxe but discovered in the heart. “It’s gold that you earn, not buy,” he said, his eyes shining with a light I didn’t yet understand.
Years have passed. My grandfather died one winter morning, peacefully, in his sleep. It was said that he had a good life. I just felt a void. Like a book closing in the middle of a chapter.
A few weeks later, while searching his attic, that poetic jumble of worthless but mysterious objects, I found a map, carefully folded inside an old book by Hermann Hesse. It represented a mountain range, a point marked by a strange symbol: a golden circle split by a vertical line. Below, a sentence scribbled in shaky handwriting:
"It's not gold you're looking for. It's what gold will show you."
I left. Without warning. Without a specific plan. My heart was beating with an excitement I hadn't felt since childhood. The journey took me from India to Nepal, then to remote trails in Tibet, where technology ends and silence begins. I walked, alone, in the snow, in the wind, between prayer flags that flapped like the songs of ancient souls.
It was an old man with clear eyes who found me, on the verge of exhaustion. He hardly spoke. Just a word:
“Follow me.»
He led me to a cave carved into the mountain. Nothing spectacular. A simple black opening between two cold walls. But as soon as I walked in, I felt something change. The air was dense, almost liquid. A soft, golden light emanated from the walls with no visible source. And in the center… there was her.
A stone. Not a nugget. Not an ingot. A golden stone, as if sculpted by time itself. But it wasn't its shape that struck me. That's what I heard.
A song. First dull, then clear. Like a cosmic lullaby. It wasn't an outside sound. It was an inner resonance, a whisper in my chest, a vibration in my bones. And through this song… I saw.
I saw men fight, kill, betray – for her. I have seen women hide a gold jewel under their skirt to feed their children. I saw slaves in chains, digging the earth for a king who didn't even remember their names. But I also saw an old poet melt down his last ring to make a pendant which he gave to an orphan girl. I saw a child pick up a nugget from a river and hand it back, without hesitation, to a tearful man.
And then… I saw my grandfather. I saw him young, alive, smiling. He held that same stone in his hands. And he was crying. No pain. Of peace.
When I came out of the cave, the old man was waiting for me. He handed me a small piece of paper. There was only one word:
“Transmit.”
Since then, I have never looked for gold in the material.
I found it in stories. In memories. In acts of love, courageous choices, true silences. Gold is only worth what it reveals. He doesn't buy anything. He reveals everything.
Today, if I am writing this story to you, it is because the singing continues.
And maybe through my words you will hear it too.
Thank you very much for reading! I invite my friends @pelon53, @miftahulrizky, and @marito74 to join this exciting fitness challenge.
Best Regards,
@kouba01
Your writing is moving and surely conveys a lot to those who read it, especially when we have been raised with values, when we can see beyond the material, when we have faith.
For a moment, I remembered my paternal grandmother and the beautiful stories she told me as a child, which always left a mark on me. Sorry, I'm feeling nostalgic today.
Many people cannot or do not want to see that golden glow that encapsulates the lesson of your story and that is present in everyone's life. Sometimes they have to go through trials to discover the meaning of life.
You know, I thought this contest was over, but I see that it isn't. Thank you for remembering me, and may you always see the glow in your life. Blessings to you and yours.
A big thank you for this message full of emotion and depth. Memories of your childhood and your grandmother bring a special beauty to your reading.
I am touched that my text has awakened in you this inner light that few people still know how to see. You are right, trials often reveal what makes the most sense. May this shine never leave you.
💕🙏
Thank you for participating in the competition.
Thank you!
Hola @kouba01, es una historia que cuentas aquí como si la hubieses vivido, eso le da un toque personal.
Hay quien dice que si prestamos atención a la naturaleza podríamos incluso escuchar cosas , sonidos, que no son habituales, no creo que sea con la intensidad que la compartes aquí, pero si que recuerdos pueden llegar, gracias por participar en el concurso
Hola @josevas217
Gracias por tus amables palabras. Tienes razón, la naturaleza siempre guarda sonidos y recuerdos para quienes los escuchan. Me alegra que la historia te haya transmitido ese sentimiento. Un cordial saludo y que siempre encuentres lo que buscas en la vida!
Красивая история и красиво описанная.
Я жалею, что не владею языком оригинала, уверен, что она ещё более чарующая:)
Желаю тебе успеха в конкурсе)
Спаcибо большое за ваши добрые слова! Їто история смогла передать вам свою атмосферу, даже если оригинал на другом яηыке! которую вы читаете или пишете, ириносит радость!
🖐 😊 👌
El oro es lo que puede mostrar, es cierto, revela el carácter de los hombres la mayoría de las veces, y este puede ser malvado o lleno de bondad. El abuelo encontró paz, que es la mayor de las recompensas que se puedan encontrar.
Gracias por participar en el concurso.
Agradezco mucho tu mensaje tan íntimo y profundo.
Estás en lo correcto, el oro muestra el auténtico carácter del ser humano, ya sea para el bien o para el mal.
La tranquilidad de mi abuelo fue el tesoro más preciado, y contar su historia es mi forma de rendirle tributo.
Un saludo cordial y agradecimiento por tus palabras repletas de sabiduría.
¡Hola¡
¡Wow! Amigo está historia estuvo increíble compartes muchas cosas, y muchos mensajes en esta historia. No todos los material es hermoso en la vida pues cuando morimos no vamos con nada de eso, si no que vamos con el cariño qué recibimos de partes de nuestra familia, también nos vamos con esos hermosos recuerdos, que algún día nos hicieron reír y nos sacaron de una fuerte tristeza, muchas personas no ven cual es en verdad ese brillo del oro, que son los recuerdos y no lo material.
Está historia nos deja una gran reflexión amigo, pues no debemos de fijarnos en la belleza de el oro, y en el brillo, si no como nos sentimos con ellos y recordando hermosos momentos que vivimos en este caso, con tu abuelo. Un fuerte abrazo y suerte en el concurso.
¡Hola, luisito01!
Muchas gracias por tus hermosas palabras. Sí, tienes razón, los mejores tesoros de la vida son estos momentos y recuerdos con nuestros seres queridos. El oro puede brillar, pero el calor del amor hacia nuestra familia resplandece por la eternidad. Muchas gracias por apoyarme y también por desearme buena suerte en el concurso. ¡Un gran abrazo para ti también!
Thank you for this extraordinary story! It truly reminds us that true values are often hidden in our memories and experiences. Your ability to convey emotions and the depth of experience is inspiring. I hope that many people will find their "gold" in life, just like you!
The wisdom of grandparents is surprising. They tend to see beyond what the world offers; they don't let themselves be blinded by shiny things or fooled by superficial things. They tend to discover the essence of life, things that seem simple, but that have great value.
Thank you for joining the contest.
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