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RE: A Sweet Tale from This Side of the Map
It's amazing how interesting something can sound if you try 😉
The way you say it...
"He tilted his head slightly, trying to look away.
"Please… tie your hair," he murmured. "I keep forgetting what I’m trying to say."
On the contrary:
He tilted his head slightly, trying to look away.
"Please… tie your hair," he murmured. "I keep forgetting what I’m trying to say." (Because your hair is sticking in my nose).
The second version fits my husband!