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RE: Desafío Steemit S26-w4: La amistad improbable

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Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-4: The Unlikely Friendship

Dear @wilmer1988, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.7/5
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3
Presentation0.9/1
My observation0.9/1
Total9.4/10

Feedback

  • The story needed a little more scope as this was not about Dev only but the entire staff. The time spent on waiting process could be used for making theme interesting.

  • Tina was supposed to audit the accounts and find faults of the entire sales staff but here her role is limited to only Dev's activities.

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