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RE: Horror Club: About My Father
wow. that's excellent. Normally I don't read horror, but the first sentence caught my eye so I was compelled to read it.
wow. that's excellent. Normally I don't read horror, but the first sentence caught my eye so I was compelled to read it.
Ha ha, thanks for taking a chance! Also thanks for the feedback, I've been trying to make good first-line hooks. Good to hear it's working :D
oh YES! You did a good job!