Thanks for sharing your thoughts on second-hand smoke, @chalil05. We have to relocate when a woman in church sits within smelling distance of us - the odor is so strong, it's nauseating (for us).
I'm curious why you used the #keangaroo tag, as this does not appear to be a contest entry. Keep writing - and please consider the fiction workshop at Isle of Write. It's free. Volunteers donate their time to help writers get better at writing.