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RE: Marvelous Tales Contest # 14 - What a Bad Darkness!

in #marveloustales8 years ago

What a bad darkness indeed! This was a nice simple story. I really like how you compared winter to the melancholy that comes with longing. Interspersing it with the children playing really highlighted the emotion that Ria must've been going through. I imagine her cracking a smile upon hearing that student exclaim the title. Great work!

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Yes, she sure did crack a smile. I'm glad you liked the story and I hope it made you laugh.