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RE: Nanomancer Creative Writing Competition Entry: Amalynde
Too short, if anything. The spare prose almost doesn't give us enough reasons to care about the protag. I'd have liked a bit more context. But you've set us well in place here, it's a world we can see and feel. It's a good piece.
I would love, love, LOVE to flesh this piece out. Amalynde is cool.
I really hope to give you that opportunity...but even better than that, building upon characters, adding to the artwork, creating new stories within the world is all something I hope will happen organically. The difficulty will be maintaining coherence but I believe that is possible once we've built out a little more of the world, it's inhabitants and a chronology of key events. Always using appropriate tags will also help unify the body of work whilst enabling the freedom to create.