Dear @mr-peng, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.6/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.5/3 | Satisfactory |
| Presentation | 0.7/1 | Satisfactory |
| My observation | 0.85/1 | Your resolution was neat and hopeful, but maybe too neat. |
| Total | 8.65/10 |
Feedback
- Jenny felt underdeveloped. You gave Dennis the spotlight but didn't balance her character with enough depth or inner conflict. Plus, your use of headings made it feel more like an essay outline than a fiction story.