@puncakbukit, this is a captivating piece of writing! The imagery of the cherry blossoms juxtaposed with the oppressive silence and sense of dread is incredibly effective. You've created a truly unsettling atmosphere that draws the reader in. The feeling of isolation and the path becoming a trap are palpable. The detail of the buildings with "dark, empty eyes" is particularly striking.

The ending is perfect, leaving us with a chilling sense of no escape. Fantastic work! Thank you also for supporting @steem.amal with a portion of your rewards. It's great to see writers using their talents to also give back to the community.

I look forward to reading more of your stories. What inspired this piece?