"Abandoned sailor " - poetry and photo by @margaretwise. Entry for Friday Poemchallenge.

in #poemchallenge8 years ago (edited)

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Far from the port, from the mainland only stars glimmered over his head
After endless waves of the ocean, the peculiar object drifts,
Abandoned, lonely sailor regretted no one,
In his reverie, he remembers ...

With sadness in his eyes he returns to the times that have passed,
Remembering the crew, what fidelity had promised him,
Thrown to the wind, the devils unfortunately took,
And the carefree crew was somewhere on the shore ...

So drifting our solitary among the waves,
Little wonder, because it's all incomprehensible,
And only his lost faith in people regret,
From today alone the rudder, the sailor, the ship ...





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BEautiful poem and photo, Meg, my dear friend! Up and resteemed! 😃

wow wonderful senary
@anisullah

Thank you so much , appreciate ;)))

My heart to the sailor, who buries his loneliness in the deep and troubled seas. Beautiful, wistful and so well written.

So says me. ;) It is lovely!

Thank you for such wonderful words my dear ;)))

You made a typo in the title.
You wrote "poeamchallenge" instead of "poemchallenge".
I just write this to let you know.
Enjoy Steemit!
Have a nice day and have a nice weekend!

Thank you so much. You are the best ;)))

Very sensitive written! I do like the choosen words.

I made my entry, and after a very busy week the mind was not open enough, but it came from the heart.

Have a Nice relaxing weekend!

Old sailors don't die the salt in their veins returns to the sea.

excellent poem my friend.

This is wonderful Photography.
Thanks @margaretwise
Have a nice day

This is great article and nice photography.
100% like and resteem