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RE: Shakespearean Sonnet I: Twilight Desire (Poetry)

in #poetry7 years ago

Looks like we both wrote sonnets today.. I definitely have a lot to learn from you though.. This is really good

But dreams come to an end with rising dawn as love wanes dreary, lead becomes my limbs

Your description of old age is a beauty

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Thank you so much! I've been away from my computer most of today, but will try to get to your post to see what you've written - if not tonight, then tomorrow.

I saw your comment already... thanks...

Is there a way we could chat?? I'd really love to learn more about sonnets from you because what I've been getting off the internet is really sketchy gibberish

If you're on Facebook, please send me a friend request, and we can chat in private messaging, okay? https://www.facebook.com/JulieCatherineEdwards

In the meantime, I will try to find you some good links to Classical Poetry Formats that might be of some help to you.

Thanks a lot ma... that would be helpful... I would endevour to message you as soon as possible..