You play god

in #poetry8 years ago

Away with your foul breath of Love.
The stench of your betrayal
has cast a dark veil over the moon of my heart.
And darkness gains prominence.
A million stars of bleeding arteries
All blink and quaver in solemn acclaim
Of an acrid smell of your soured love.

The smile on my face
You have turned to grimace.
The chirping insects
The ominous hoot of an owl
All sing to a symphony
Of your splash of thick black
On my soul's canvas
As I walk through this solitary long night

Yet your deceitful smile
Sends flaming darts to my heart
Its flash halves my soul
I come still
To play your mangled love specimen.
And you play god.

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Harry your ways with words is as smooth as the sail of ship on the sea.

Awesome bro.

Lolz. Bia, Chukwuemeka don't ward off great teachers I'm gonna learn stuff from. I don't know if I'm the only one that word application dey scare.

Message well delivered. This awesome

Wow i am really impressed
Short but very very informative

Thanks. I'm glad you loved it

Playing God has consequences definitely. Learned a lot from this post. Thanks bro

Lolz. Thanks a lot. I'm happy you did learn something from that.

This is lovely, expecting more of this.

Thanks bro. Sure you will.

Wow wonderful, wish to learn from you. 😊

You have to write an application to me, to know if you are eligible to learn.

Hahahahahaha, I am coming

Lolz. Thanks. I'm but a learner still. Come bearing your teaching tools 'cos the supposed teacher might turn out to be taught after all.

The diction left my mouth watery, well sieved. @harry

Thanks Ekpe

U r welcome bro... Ekpe!

Great, I had to consult dictionary for one or two words. Well done

That's cool bro.

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Wow, the grammer you use here no be moi moi....kudos boss

Lol. Thanks. But I wasn't grandiloquent I guess.