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RE: away. (Day 70 of 100 -- Poetry challenge)
Rebuttal:
Daybreak.
Dark, morning.
False dreams vanish.
Revealing reality appears.
Unfolding momentarily.
Doubling back and forth.
High noon.
Bright, midday.
Success and failure, intertwined.
Dusk.
Dark, evening.
Unwind. Relax. Refresh.
Night. Sleep.
Bright dreams.
Darkness.
Great imagery here @hrissm! You are just as talented as @mamadini when it comes to invoking imagery into the writings. Thank you for your talent. Have a wonderful and blessed day!
Thanks appreciate the kind words and glad you enjoyed. I tend to need some direct inspiration to be poetic and actually share/document it.
I understand and you are welcome.
Mmmmm.
I love this kind of rebuttal.
Gorgeousness. Hopeful.
Perception provides perfection — even though, we know, it doesn’t exist.
While it also, and/or actually, exists everywhere.
Very astute, and, I very much agree. :)