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RE: Shavasana (Day 58 of 100 -- Poetry challenge)

in #poetry7 years ago

is the corpse pose not
facing upwards?
towards the sky
away from the earth.
lest your earthly inhalation
be simply metaphoric,
as you state
that the sky receives
your exhalation...

I'd like a return here:

Follow the blood tracks
back to nowhere
if you must.

but that's just me.

I like the poetry.

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Yes, however, part of the meditation is about breathing the earth in and out.

Thank you for always stopping by, I really enjoy your presence here and value your feedback.

Yw. But — thank yourself.
The feedback is, I try to make, as valuable as the content that inspires it.

Yes, however, part of the meditation is about breathing the earth in and out.

I’m still learning.