The Gods Who Strike With Golden Iron Rod

in #poetry8 years ago

Thou art holy with madness!
Your word is as rough as sandstone,
your cleanup befell upon us swiping our reasons,
end up a cadaver. scrap like an abandon paper!

Thou art holy full of loath!
Your beating swipe the naked bodies,
the stench is a sweet savor you endure,
a power of absolute fury, you sneer.

Thou art benevolent uncharacteristically!
Summoned the wise men unto their death,
pronounce a sham worship at your feet,
a mere soul as a beast stray miserably!

A pitiable mortal stoned of complexity eroded vehemently,
shrouded a cloak of steadfast absurdity, roughly you care,
a lifeless contention adduces a zest of senseless state,
prudently captured the hearts of dull deities,  
a shrewd cogitation mangled flawlessly,
mingled corruptions by the gods, feeble providence?

Tender dispute among the condemned soul, a golden iron rod smote the heathens,
they have smitten the bone of my people, the charmed accolade of false demigod,
an apostle of apostate bribe with 30 silver, brandishing the defectors mark,
a whistling sounds hit the Word scraping the fleshly wounded frailty frame, I bowed degraded!
Imputing the blood unto my vein, its course the life to epiphaneia, in perpetuity!


October 9, 2017
Sampaloc, Manila


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I enjoyed the language of this and all of the fantastic imagery. I am sorry I didn't get to it before the payout deadline passed. Good work though.

Thanks for the comment moeknows! I'll try to compose a poem in a few days...

A moving poem calling out the feeble false dieties and the promises that fail our mortal souls. A glorious testament to the Savior whose blood can cleanse and revive us. I love

a whistling sounds hit the Word scraping the fleshly wounded frailty frame, I bowed degraded!
Imputing the blood unto my vein, its course the life to epiphaneia, in perpetuity!

I know you'll be able to decipher this simple poem. And yes, cleanse and reviving us from our infirmities only by the blood of the Savior!

Thanks wandrose7!

Ay lol salamat mam wanderinggian21!

Nice poem sir. Had to look at the dictionary to understand it though lol

With the way you write... Nah... I know you can compose a poem like this... say 2 days or 1 day maybe... or 5 hours? Lol!

Wow! Sir John, this is magical!

You can compose more than what I wrote, iyanpol12!

ang lalim na naman po sir..di maarok ng utak ko hehe

Makakagawa ka rin nito mama willow1114!

Pwede pakitranslate sir john sa tagalog? haha ganda ng pagkakasulat

Mam matutunaw na ako sa kakaisip kapag iniliwat ko ito sa Filipino. ehehehee

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Immortality. Endless possibilities. Only THE GODS. Nosebleeding poem, kuya. Maganda. Maganda!!!

The Gods who needs the God... Ayun o! Thanks, Jerryl!

Wala na talaga akong masabi kundi, super galing talaga.

Salamat ng marami mam rakitera sa simpleng ito nagustuhan mo!