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RE: The bottomless well

in #poetry8 years ago (edited)

Wow i can see beautiful chaos in this poem, the way the mood looks tensed and yet gentle and serene is such a lovely thing.

I must drink deep from the spirit well.
Someday I will find the sweet libation.
Then, I will rest my weary hands

This stanza is so awesome.your use of words are splendid.

Beautiful poem @D-pend

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Thank you my friend @josediccus, you have keen discernment. I appreciate your support and feedback!!

Of course buddy @d-pend your works are very good, i really love them all. I will keep checking them out, and thanks for your suport too